What we changed:
We changed our story, from OCD Drama story, to a problematic suicidal gothic drama story. We also didn't use any zoom in and zoom out shots. As a group we all finally participate on draft 2, hoping we could all participate again on draft 3 and 4.
What went well -
- The story is more clearer.
- Some transitions on the video we're good.
- The bus shot was a clean shot.
- The different weather e.g. the flash back was rainy, whilst the present time was sunny.
Even Better If -
- We filmed in a more busy place.
- Change the music
- Exaggerate the props and make up for Paul - to emphasise that he's a goth in our opening sequence.
- Make use of the tripod
- Emphasise Paul's character of being a goth and the fact that he's on a verge to commit suicide
